My apologies for my recent absence. I came down with a cold — a warning from god about going to Seattle in the Winter — then got bit in the ass by a long-standing Real Life Dilemma. I missed all of the vendorslut “news,” so I don’t even know how deeply inspired were the attendees by being yelled at by Gary Vaynerchuk. (“C’mon! People! It’s not customer service unless you emote from the throat!”)
Am I being hypercritical? I don’t think so. We’re all of us victims of bullshit now and then. The trick is to scrape it off your shoes before you track it all over everything.
Meanwhile, Brian Brady shot this to me by email:
Shawna Ebersole asked us to critique iShopGreenwood.com and give her some ideas for promoting her weblog.
Well. At the risk of seeming hypercritical, I will say that the site seems to me — a male specimen — to be girly and cluttered. The overarching them is High Concept — which means you have to figure it out. No, that’s not a collection of girly-colored boxes, it’s a mall, a big-city indoor shopping mall.
Even so, I don’t care. I don’t care for the colors and I didn’t like having to figure out what was going on, but I don’t think that hurts anything. I also don’t think it helps anything. There are a zillion much-less-clever real estate weblogs, and they probably do just about as well as this one.
But here’s something I really, really liked: The site is very rich in content. My take is that Shawna Ebersole predates real estate weblogging by quite a while, and she seems to have retained every bit of the content she had developed before she took the plunge with a blogsite from Jim Cronin’s RealEstateTomato.com.
Isn’t that a bad thing? I don’t think so. I’ve written before — and should write more extensively — about the idea of satisfaction — feeling full. When people are sampling any of your marketing, they need to be able to consume enough to “feel full.” No one acts before they’re ready to, and you have to hang on to them long enough for them to achieve that feeling of satisfaction — or they will move on. Having lots of good, consumer-focused content is essential to converting visitors to prospects to clients.
In light of that, here is a real defect in the site: The contact form is thrown off onto another page. Brian and I know from testing that the more difficult you make it to buy your product, the fewer people will respond. I think code to make contact by phone, by email or by form should be available on every page of a consumer-focused real estate weblog. I’m starting to think I want to plug the idea of contact at the bottom of every post and page in the weblog. You cannot make making contact too easy, but it is much too easy to make it too hard.
I don’t like all the Javascript widgets, and, at least on Safari, they slow the site down a lot. My take is that anything that is not focused on converting visitors to clients is a waste of space, bandwidth and mindshare.
As for promoting the site, this is what we talk about all the time. Shawna’s clients are not other real estate webloggers, so she should stop trying to engage or entertain them. Her clients are buyers and sellers in Greenwood, Indiana, and her weblog is her best way of connecting with them by passive means. She promotes the site very well in her collateral pieces — and here the graphic richness seems to pay off better.
The next step is to make connections with other local webloggers. There are a lot of ways to do this, but one quick way is to create a Scenius scene of local news and information, and then make that available for free to other local blogs. This is useful both for forging relationships with bloggers who can actually send her business and for enhancing her SEO profile.
Shawna’s a hard-working dog, and that shines through in her site. I’m betting that my typically-male reaction to the colors and the clutter is offset by the response of typical females. In any case, the weblog gets a lot right, and I doubt it is hurt very much by what it is getting wrong.
Here’s the fun part: Your thoughts. Shawna volunteered for this scrutiny, so I’m hoping she can bear up to it. In your opinion, what should she be doing differently?
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Chris Johnson says:
>>>>As for promoting the site, this is what we talk about all the time. Shawnaβs clients are not other real estate webloggers,
You mrean there’s life outside of these corridors? Holy hell, people. What gives? I thought the job of a RE weblogger was to connect with other webblogers? CRAP! I mean, i have to get deals from the Public?
Wait–wait. If I’m getting praise from the RE.NET but no deals out of it, is my blog good or bad?
January 14, 2009 — 11:53 am
Scott Cowan says:
Greg,
You do not have to worry about getting sick in Seattle during the winter. You will need to worry about rusting though.
January 14, 2009 — 1:33 pm
J Boyer Morristown NJ says:
The blog did not seem all that bad to me. A bit cluttered and I think it gives the wrong first impression, but other than that it seems good.
January 14, 2009 — 2:32 pm
Shawna Ebersole says:
Wow….I’m kind of reminded of my first day sof wim lessons. I thought I was going to get to play in the water and learn how to swim. Instead, my not so lovely swim teacher caught me by surprise and pushed me in the deep end!
Sweet, innocent little me thought I was asking Brian Brady for advice on how to create a good mortgage page on my site…also called “ATM”. I didn’t realize I was volunteering to stand on my front porch naked!
However…I must say that I actually enjoyed reading the review and getting some constructive criticism.
As far as making it easier to contact us…yes, that’s something we talked about with our web designer and well, the layout of the site wasn’t our idea and we weren’t really sure if people would “get it” or not either but like you said…we’re hoping to make the site rich in content enough that it will make people want to come back for more. But for the most part, although we went round and round with our designer on different things, the overall feedback from the site has been pretty positive.
I didn’t realize I was writing so much to other realtors…so I’ll try to keep a better eye on that. And as far as hooking up with other local bloggers or websites, I tried briefly to find some to connect to, but maybe I need to give that a little more effort.
All in all, I just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to review the site so thoroughly and share your honest feedback. It definitely helped and I can’t wait until this whole new world of blogging starts to feel more comfortable.
Thanks again!
Shawna π
PS – I thought I was going to get some advice on the mortgage page…??? Maybe not…???
January 14, 2009 — 5:38 pm
Cheryl Johnson says:
It’s actually quite clever. It took me a minute to realize it was a real estate site, not an online store. (And I was ~so~ ready to buy a hot pink tote bag)
Mortgage = ATM In this “Post Boom” world, that’s probably not a connection you want to suggest. π
But all else aside, I still believe “Content is King”, and I concur with Greg that iShopGreenwood is absoultely packed with good content.
January 14, 2009 — 7:29 pm
Thomas Johnson says:
“my typically-male reaction to the colors and the clutter is offset by the response of typical females.”
Greg- SHE buys the house….
But you know that already.
January 14, 2009 — 7:54 pm
Teri L says:
Great content!
Shawna, connecting with local bloggers is one of the smartest things you can do. Go join the conversation on their blogs. Bloggers love comments so give freely, give early, and give often.
Now, it’s likely that I’m not a typical female, but this site is entirely too chic hip-chick, sex-in-the-city girlfriendly for me. However!!! My own little blog has gotten slammed for not being so bland as to appeal to everyone.
Here’s the thing: I will remember your site. And I am a typical enough female that would tell my (gay)friends who love the mall and is looking for a house that I found the perfect Realtor for them and (s)he must check out your site! Win some, lose some. π
Brian Brady- Order a bourbon and water and I’ll join you at the wing bar. π
January 14, 2009 — 9:08 pm
Michelle DeRepentigny says:
It’s adorably cute and really fun after you figure it out. To be honest I loved the colors and home page but I’m a girly girl π
I am going to admit that I clicked over from Greg’s post earlier today and never even realized the “stores” in the mall were categories, I wonder if I am the only one?
Take Brian’s suggestion about the sports store one more step and create some kind of “mostly men store” (I don’t know, where do men shop in the mall? a bookstore maybe) and tone down colors and make it a resource for all that logical crap men want to see like stats and trends.
January 14, 2009 — 10:34 pm
Eric Blackwell says:
Shawna;
First off, I am a guy. I still have my man card. This means that I don’t like your blog (grin). That’s OK! It is either a sign that you designed it right or I have my manhood intact. (hopefully both! grin)
But I learned a lesson a long time ago from the lady who designed a previous iteration of Real Living’s website. Make it (your real estate web presence) for women. Check your man card at the door. Round your corners, soften your edges, and accessorize!
As such, I am going to recuse myself from evaluating your site at all. I am not your intended audience so I don’t feel qualified to vote(grin) whew…man card is still intact.
I am qualified to comment on how to promote it, however. What Brian Brady talks about with Facebook advertising will WORK. It will pay you in spades. Give it a try. You will be glad you did. Low cost. HIGH return stuff.
Here’s wishing you the best with your blog!
January 15, 2009 — 5:43 am
Teri Lussier says:
Michelle-
She could add the hardware dept, the geek store, the game store…
Shawna- definitely a fun site to visit.
January 15, 2009 — 9:05 am
Eric Blackwell says:
“make it a resource for all that logical crap men want to see like stats and trends.”
(grin)
I resemble that remark.
Nicely done, Michelle! π
January 15, 2009 — 9:52 am
Shawna Ebersole says:
This has really been great…thank you so much for all of your helpful tips. I really can’t wait to start making changes to the site to make it even better.
Now Bloodhounds…I need your help…
I’ve been put to a challenge by my skeptical broker. You see, he’s not a believer in this whole “blog” thing. And he’s very excited about his new website that’s being developed (I have no idea how much it must be costing him) but he’s been promised by his website developer that his new site will have 6,000 incoming links within the next 3 months. Something he kind of implied couldn’t be done with my “blog”site.
So whada ya say? Can I take him on? I really want to! I acted like it was no big deal, but in my head I was thinking “OK…6,000 incoming links in the next 3 months…that’s 2,000 a month…which makes it 500 a week…”
I need your help. I need your tips. I need your advice. I so want to catch him by surprise.
Any suggestions???
January 16, 2009 — 3:53 am
Justin Smith | Searching Solutions says:
Hi Shawna,
If I were you I wouldn’t fall into the trap of competing for incoming links. First of all, I can guarantee you that those 6,000 links won’t be worth hardly anything.
Concentrate on what really matters like connecting with the local blogosphere, making connections with other real estate bloggers, and writing great content. Those links will come in naturally and I absolutely promise you that they will be worth more than the “6,000”.
By the way, you should tell your broker to run and hide from that website developer….
January 19, 2009 — 8:44 am
Shawna Ebersole says:
Thanks Justin….that’s good advice.
Shawna π
January 20, 2009 — 3:14 pm